恋爱陷阱by叫我小肉肉:英文翻译

爱的朋友 我已经收到您的信件 因为现在中国已经热起来了 生意比较忙 所以没有给你发信 对次我表示歉意 我想知道现在你那边的生意情况 也想知道您什么时间来中国 把最美好的祝愿送给您
Dear my friend,
I received your letter/Email.
The weather is hoter and hotter and I am busy with business.So I don't write to you. I am really sorry for this. Do you mind to tell me your business condition in your side? I also want to know when will you visit China.

Best Regards!

亲爱的朋友 我已经收到您的信件 因为现在中国已经热起来了 生意比较忙 所以没有给你发信 对次我表示歉意 我想知道现在你那边的生意情况 也想知道您什么时间来中国 把最美好的祝愿送给您
Dear friend:
I have received your letter.China is getting hot now,so business gets more and more.As a result,I didn't write back immediately.I am sorry about that.What's the situation there?When will you come to China?
Best regards from the deepest of my heart!
Yours,
XXX
本人认为楼上几位的回答都有语法错误，像一楼的dear my friend,dear后怎能再用my，二楼第二句两分句之间没有连接词,且so that不能用做因此的意思。

Dear friend,
I have received the letter from you.The business in China are booming,so i'm very busy and have no time to write back.I'm very sorry about that.I want to know the business environment in your country, and when will you come to China.
Best wishes for you!

Dear Friend,
I have received your letter. It is getting hot in China and I am busy with my business recently. So I didn't reply your letter immediately. I am so sorry about that. How's your business lately? When will you come to China?

Best wishes

Dear friend:
I have receive your letter . China was hot,my business was busy so that I hadn't send letter to you.I'm sorry about that.I want to kown the business situation about there,and I also want to kown when will come to China .
Best wishes