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公司的经营宗旨制定了企业的经营主业范围和经营产品的定位,公司未来的发展将围绕着经营宗旨开展企业的经营工作。在经营上做强做大,在产品方面做专做精。与此同时,坚定不移地实施名牌战略,精心培育在国内外同行业有较大影响力的“劲马”名牌产品,以提高顾客满意度和培养忠诚顾客为目标,推动市场销售和管理绩效的全面提高,从而最大限度的提高企业经济效益。

According to business tends of Corp, scope of main business and products orientation was to established, the development of Corp future should carry out business work around with tends, making stronger and stronger in the business side and making professional and special in product in management and keep improving in products. At the same time, Corp was implemented unalterably “Famous Brand Strategy” and painstaking attention to setup “Jingma”, which is a famous brand product have more influence not only in china, but also oversea, in order to promote degree of satisfaction and bring up goal for faithful customers. And boost in roundly improve of marketing sale and business achievement and efforts to boost in business maximize profit.
公司的经营宗旨制定了企业的经营主业范围和经营产品的定位,公司未来的发展将围绕着经营宗旨开展企业的经营工作。在经营上做强做大,在产品方面做专做精。与此同时,坚定不移地实施名牌战略,精心培育在国内外同行业有较大影响力的“劲马”名牌产品,以提高顾客满意度和培养忠诚顾客为目标,推动市场销售和管理绩效的全面提高,从而最大限度的提高企业经济效益。

tends - 不明白你指什么
Corp - 一般在这种情况下不用缩写
the scope
to develop company's future according to its goals
哎...不知道...你那一句话那么长...不是这样讲的

无论如何China要大写,建议这样的文章找个学过marketing的人写(学过英文版的),感觉不是语法的问题,有点词不达意,而且感觉不到你们公司的决心,语言不够强势,平平淡淡的