守望先锋类型手游:英语改错题

1. a 去掉.newsb 不可数
2. a->the
3. take->took
4. was->were
5. strong->strongly
6. 两个it中,后一个是is吧?too->so, so...that...固定搭配.
7. alone->lonely.lonely指情感上孤独,觉得孤独,正合适.
8. live->living
9. 正确
10. fact后加that.同位语从句中,that不可省.

(1)news 不可数，所以要a piece of news
(2)i have been offered用被动语态
(3)had taken the exam 用过去完成时
(4)a few were chosen复数
(5)strongly副词
(6)they would not 过去将来
(7)were afraid过去时
(8)such a young girl
(9)i can continue
(10)succeed in asking

总的来讲，这篇东西要改错的地方有很多，写得太滥了！：(

对二楼的修改意见^-^
2，改为被动：i have been offered a scholarship
4,only a few were chosen,was改为were
5,strong改为strongly
6,我估计是你多打了一个it,应该把too改为so,so...that结构
7.alone改为lonely,主观上的寂寞

我觉的10应该是将ASK改为talk
这应该是告诉的意思吧

(1)a 去掉.newsb 不可数
(2)i have been offered用被动语态
(3)take 改took
(4)第一个was 改were
(5)strong 改strongly
(6)第一个it 改that
（7）a改为the
（8）imagine后加how
(9)正确
(10)fact后加that.

How are you? Today I have got a wonderful news to tell you.
(1)去掉a
I have offered a sholarship at a university in Australia for my
(2)at改为in
further education. One hundred and twenty students take the exam
(3)take改为took
for it, but only a few was chosen and I was one of them, however
(4)however后加逗号
my parents are not happy about it. They are strrong against me
(5)strrong改为strong
going there. They say it it too far away that they will not see me
(6)第二个it去掉
for a whole year and they are afraid I will feel alone. They can't
(7)a改为the
imagine so young a girl live alone abroad. They advise me to study
(8)live改为living
in the capital instead. Then I'll be able to continue living with them
(9)then改为thus
How can I successfully ask them to accept the fact I have grown up?
(10)fact后加that
我觉得应该没问题