非格调行为指南百度云:请你来改 错，？哈哈，英语

classmater=classmate.
注意时态的一致。

I feel embarrassed that I accepted a notebook from my classmate. I do not know how long I will take it with me.

But I start to write diary on it from now on to record following days. I had a talk with my classmate tonight. The thing was that I will marry a man whose first name is Gan on 27 years old of my age, to wear a red clothing on our wedding party and give a birth to a girl. But I am not sure if it is possible.

I felt embarrassed when I accepted this notebook from my classmate.I don't know how long I will take it with me.but I will start writing diary on it from now on.recading following days
tonight I talked with my classmate .the result is that i will marry a man whose first name is Gan and give birth to a girl ,wear red cloth on our day ,i will marry in my 27 ages it is impossible ,i am not sure for that

give birth a girl ？
大概意思能明白！

Can't find them, tell me where is the mistake?