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Dear Xiao Wang,
I’m glad to receive your letter.I remember we havenot keep in catch with each other since last year.I can recall that we went to lijinag in Guangxi province, which has left me so much happiness and enchanting memory!
My parents are fond of you very much ,so I think they will prepare many food for you.
One the day,you should have a rest and play music with me in my home.
In the night ,you will have a good sleep ,because we keep warm in your room.
During next severl days,we may go to the park in which is very beautiful flowers having many bee.There is a large brigde over the river,in which many fish are.I hope that day will be clear,if that we must have good memory.You must want to taste local food and dishes.ok?I can make you content。If you want to know our city .I may bring you to library or exhibition。
Ok, in a word, you will have a good time during this tour.You donot need for you to take angthing,I’ll prepara everyone for you.
I am looking forward to see you again soon
Best regards.