高校问答ubuntu安装py模块:帮我检查一下有没有大的语法错误~（英语）
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listenling!
a song is singing.
it says i love u my darling.
but i am knowing,
i can only say it when you are sleeping...
my heart is crying.
so,next time i will trying,
try forgetting
because i can not help loving
stop~!stop running~!
听~那歌声
它在传达我爱你，
但我知道
我只能在你睡着的时候告诉你
我的心在哭泣
所以在下一次我会做出抉择
努力忘记
因为我情不自禁的爱你...
最后一句翻不好，就是想写running
写的是诗，是不是不用太讲究语法？
一楼的那位，我查了一下字典，trying好像有抉择的意思，还有try应该有try doing和try to do 两种用法吧，小弟才疏学浅，忘大哥予以解答
a song is singing.
it says i love u my darling.
but i am knowing,
i can only say it when you are sleeping...
my heart is crying.
so,next time i will trying,
try forgetting
because i can not help loving
stop~!stop running~!
听~那歌声
它在传达我爱你，
但我知道
我只能在你睡着的时候告诉你
我的心在哭泣
所以在下一次我会做出抉择
努力忘记
因为我情不自禁的爱你...
最后一句翻不好，就是想写running
写的是诗，是不是不用太讲究语法？
一楼的那位，我查了一下字典，trying好像有抉择的意思，还有try应该有try doing和try to do 两种用法吧，小弟才疏学浅，忘大哥予以解答
我帮你改了一下，是不是更上一层楼？
Oh,my darling
are u listening
a song is singing
it tells u my loving
it is feeling of wondering,
if i can only say it while sleeping
who's ever heard my heart crying
next time i will be trying
try forgetting
because i can not help loving
oh,my darling
please stop escaping and running
all you know is my feeling
"I will try",not trying
"I know",not "I am knowing".
"try to forget",not "try forgetting"
"a song has been sung",not "a song is singing",otherwise it doesn't make any sense.
写得不错，诗歌是不必太讲究语法的。
你写得真不错,我鼓励你:继续努力哦!!!
You are right