乐嘉简历:大家帮我看看,这段话有没有语病 谢谢拉~~

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大家帮我看看,这段话有没有语病 谢谢拉~~
Spring: At the middle of March ~ end of June

Spring approaches, the remnant snow not melts, goes by car to the suburb village, may ride a horse pulls the sled goes through between the maple tree forest.

Spring approaches, the remnant snow not melts, (没主语)goes by car to the suburb village, may ride a horse pulls the sled (goes)多余 through (between)不需要 the maple tree forest.

基本上看不懂

基本的主谓宾都分不出来!