坚果店:造了一个定语从句,请外语专业的看一看有何不妥

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We should see through the appearance to perceive the essence that sometimes it can hinder your work or life.
that用的对吗?
原意:我们要透过现象看本质,本质就是它有时对我们的工作和学习有害.
还有sometimes以及can的使用是否妥当?

that用的对
但必须要把it去掉,因为你说这是个定语从句,那么,that就指代的是essence,即it.

We should see through the appearance to perceive the essence which oterwise may hinder your work or life.

你的从句里有it,it本身就可以做主语了,就表明这个从句有问题.所以句子需要修改.
你的essence是要做从句主语的,所以把从句it去掉,that 就是引导定语从句的了.