高校问答孙国庆男人mp3下载:英语作文改错
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Winter Holiday is coming, children are all happy. Because we have an important and interesting festival————The Spring Festival.
I am very happy, too. This year the spring Festival is on January 28th .It is the year of dog. So before January 28th, I went shopping with my mother and my father. We bought many different kinds of food.
On January 28th, my parents are busy cooking for offer sacra. There is a lot of food on the table. At 6:00, I with my family get together. We have a big meal and celebrate the New Year. After dinner we sit on the sofa, and watch TV. The songs listen nice, the dances look beautiful. I like this night, the moon in the sky is very bright, many starts in the sky, too. They are all happy. Oh, let we shout “Ten, nine, eight……two,one,zero!We are grow up!” Fireworks blazing with color. I close my eyes make a vow to a god.
I am sixteen years old.
I am very happy, too. This year the spring Festival is on January 28th .It is the year of dog. So before January 28th, I went shopping with my mother and my father. We bought many different kinds of food.
On January 28th, my parents are busy cooking for offer sacra. There is a lot of food on the table. At 6:00, I with my family get together. We have a big meal and celebrate the New Year. After dinner we sit on the sofa, and watch TV. The songs listen nice, the dances look beautiful. I like this night, the moon in the sky is very bright, many starts in the sky, too. They are all happy. Oh, let we shout “Ten, nine, eight……two,one,zero!We are grow up!” Fireworks blazing with color. I close my eyes make a vow to a god.
I am sixteen years old.
I am very happy, too.，这句或者说成I am very happy，或者是I am happy, too 不可以说I am very happy, too
my parents are busy cooking for offer sacra应该是my parents are busy cooking for offering sacra，因为介词后面用动名词
I with my family get together可以说成All my family members get together，原来的说法有语法错误
The songs listen nice应该是The songs sound nice，因为listen是实意动词，后面不能加形容词
many starts in the sky, too应该是many stars are in the sky, too
I close my eyes make a vow to a god应该是I close my eyes make a vow to the god
先给你指几处吧！让我们一起倒数应该说成"let us count down"。，god前可不要加a呀！星星好像应该是stars，fireworks blazing with colors,中间还有很多错误，比如被动语态，are busy cooking for offer sacra可改为 are busy cooking to prepare sacra.