高校问答ygopro2青眼白龙:My Sunday初一英语作文(急)
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明天考试要考的,这篇英语作文,只要初一水平,要求写到天气和一天做的是,在线等,很急的,拜托,谢了
要求有现在进行时
要求有现在进行时
My sunday
It was sunny today.I got up late.After breakfast,I helped my mom do housework. I washed dishes,and clean the my room.I had lunch with my parents.
In the afternoon,I went to the zoo by bike.At around 6'o clock,I went to my home.After supper,I did my homework for three hours.then I watched TV for half an hour.At 10'o clock, I went to bed.
I'm happy today!
楼上的， clean the my room，应改为 clean my room或者 clean the room
I'm happy today! 你happy在哪？没有突出
初一的水平不止这样吧？好像是流水帐
楼上可真是个懂事的孩子...