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1.make for中去掉for
2.Fist应该是First
3.The trees also is good for our, 改成：Trees are also good for us。
4.We can talk about our studies to teacher中的talk改成tell
5.If we have another understand the teacher will teach us这句话不太
理解，是不是想说如果我们有其他想法，老师就会教我们的。这样的话应
该改成If we have other ideas， the teacher will teach us

make for 把 for 去掉。

Fist 改为 first

trees also is good for our, too. 改为
threes are good for us also.

have a talk 意思为 “来谈一次” 象要搞谈判，
可以用 do more communications with the teachers

If we have another understand the teacher will teach us.
改为
If we don't understand correctly , the teachers will help us.

不错很好的。

We can do many things about how to make for a more enjoyable school life. 改为We can do many things to make our school life more enjoyable.似乎更好。
First,……organize与English corner搭配好像怪怪的。
Second，……The trees are good for us，too.
Third, we can talk about our studies with our teachers.If we have any problems, they will help us.
Finally, after finishing our homework, we can play some computer games and surf the Internet.

1.Fist改为First
2.also用在句中， too用在句末，应用逗号隔开，also,too不能同时用。 trees应用复数are。
The trees also is good for our, too. 应改为The trees are also good for us. 或改为,because trees are good for us.
3. We can talk about our studies to teacher. 应改为We can talk with our teachers about our studies.
4.If we have another understand the teacher will teach us. 应改为If we have some other problems,the teachers will help us.

小改一下:
We can do many things to make our school life more enjoyable:
First, we can set up an English Corner. We can talk to each other in English and make more friends. Second, we can plant a lot of trees. The trees are good to us, too. They can clean up the air. Third, we should have a talk with teachers about our study work. If we have more questions, the teacher can explain to us. Finally, after we finish our homework, we can play some computer games and surf the Internet.