高校问答泰迪狗什么时候剪尾巴:拜托拜托有空的高手大哥大姐们~~帮忙小妹查查文法上的问题
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“Art is a lie that tells the truth.” This is a famous quote by a Spanish painter whose name is Picasso and it demonstrates that to those whom understands no significance, art tend to be defined as the decorated artwork with various appearances which appreciate one’s sense of sight. However, to those whom realizes the application of art and its true meaning, art is like a piece of implicated literary work, a meaningful song, and a rhyming poem that one has to decompose and analyze in order to fully comprehend the message communicated in the art, and only these people know what is the truth that the art is trying to express silently. Other than that, art displays simply as a lifeless and processed object but indicates nothing, as though a lie. A good example for this would be the story “Where Are You Going, Where Have You Been,” by Joyce Carol Oates. The author uses many methods of art to enhance the story and impress the readers. She repeatedly applies many motifs to the story, such as music, façade and breath that marks great feelings and impression on readers as they read her literature. Yet, among these motifs, people have the tendency to ignore the descriptive breath of Connie’s in different stages of the story because it is such an ordinary action that everyone does everyday. Nonetheless, if one notices and has good understanding of why breath takes a major role in part of the story, one is taking the story in heart and is resonating with the story as it goes. On the other hand, if one thinks nothing about the appearance of the breath but lines of words, one apparently disregard the value that the author has put on it. In a nutshell, one has to be able to acknowledge the message transmitted in the art in order to see the value of it.
拜托~~看完楼下两位的回答，我几乎以为自己问错问题了~~
可是我绝对没错！！
我要求的是文法上面的修正~~这是我写的，我当然知道文章的意思了~~~文法拉~~拜托~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~在线等~~
确定以下：please check my grammatical mistake !! thanks to everybody!
1、to those whom understands no significance,art tend to be defined...
(1)whom--->who，修饰those的从句中who是做主语，而不是考虑前面是不是有to.
(2)tend to --->tends to,art的动词必须用单数。
2、 However, to those whom realizes the application of art and its true meaning,
whom--->who，理由同上
realizes--->realize
3、in order to fully comprehend the message communicated in the art
in--->by， 不过这里可以不改吧，个人觉得in其实也可以。
4、but indicates nothing, as though a lie.
as though a lie--->as though it was a lie，as though一般是接从句，较少见接名词，接从句时必须用虚拟语气。
5、 The author uses many methods of art to enhance the story and impress the readers.
uses--->used,作者的行为是过去发生的，应该用过去时。
6、She repeatedly applies many motifs to the story, such as music, façade and breath that marks great feelings and impression on readers as they read her literature.
（1）applies--->applied,理由同5
（2）marks--->gave,留下深刻印象，一般不用mark，mark是做标记，而且一般指实物的标记；时态从主句。
why breath takes a major role in part of the story
takes--->plays,play a role是固定搭配
one is taking the story in heart and is resonating with the story as it goes.
（1）is taking--->will take，这里应该是将来时
（2）in heart--->in his heart,in heart 意味精神抖擞，情绪高昂，应该不是你所要表达的意思。
（3）is resonating--->will resonate,理由同（1）
（4）with the story--->with it,避免重复
In a nutshell, one has to be able to acknowledge the message transmitted in the art in order to see the value of it.
（1）acknowledge--->acquire,acknowledge是承认的意思，我觉得这里应该用“获得、认识到”比较妥当。（可斟酌？）
（2）in--->by，是否修改还是你决定。
"艺术是说事实的一则谎言。" 这是名字是毕卡索和它的一个西班牙画家的出名引证示范对那些谁没有了解重要性，艺术容易以感激一个视力感的各种不同的外表被定义为被装饰的艺术品。 然而, 到那些谁了解申请艺术和它的真实意义, 艺术是像一块使文学的产生关系工作, 一意义深长的歌, 和一押韵诗一必须分解而且分析为了要完全了解信息在艺术沟通了, 和只有这些人知道艺术是尝试默默地表达的事实是什么。 除了那之外，艺术只是显示如一个无生命的和加工的物体但是什么也没指出, 好像一则谎言。 给这的一个好例子会是故事乔伊斯颂歌 Oates 的 "你正要去哪里 , 你去了哪里 ," 。 作家使用艺术的许多方法提高故事而且使读者有印象。 她重复地应用到故事, 像是音乐的许多主题, fa?把棒的感觉和印象做记号于读者的 ade 和呼吸当他们读她的文学。 然而, 因为每个人每天做是如此的一个平常的行动，所以在这些主题之中，人在故事的不同阶段中让不理睬的趋向康妮的描述呼吸。 然而，如果一注意并且有呼吸为什么在故事的部份中带一个主要的角色的好理解,当它去的时候，他正在占据心的故事和正在以故事共呜。另一方面，如果一想关于呼吸的外表但是字的线无,他显然地忽视作家已经穿上它的价值。 简言之, 一必须能够承认在艺术被传输为了要见到它的价值的信息。
一些错误后面我加了解释, 一些没有 ^_^
“Art is a lie that tells the truth.” This is a famous quote by a Spanish painter whose name is Picasso, and it demonstrates that to those who understands no significance(不明白), art tends to be defined as the decorated artwork with various appearances which appreciate one’s sense of sight. However, to those who (不是whom拉) realize (复数噢) the application of art and its true meaning, it is like a piece of implicated literary work, a meaningful song, and a rhyming poem which has to be decomposed and analyzed in order to fully comprehend the communicated message. (and only these people know what is the truth that the art is trying to express silently 这个应该可以删掉, 和前面有重复噢). With the exception of that, artwork simply displays as a lifeless and processed object but indicates nothing, as though a lie. A good example for this would be the story “Where Are You Going, Where Have You Been,” by Joyce Carol Oates. The author uses many methods of art to enhance the story and impress the readers. She repeatedly applies many motifs to the story, such as music, façade and breath that makes great feelings and impression on readers as they read her literature. However (yet 好像不可以用这里噢..), among these motifs, people have the tendency to ignore the descriptive breath of Connie’s in different stages of the story, because it is such an ordinary action that everyone does everyday. Nonetheless, if someone notices and has good understanding of why breath takes a major role in part of the story, he (or she) is taking the story in heart and is resonating with the story as it goes. On the other hand, if one thinks nothing about the appearance of the breath but lines of words, one apparently disregard the value that the author has put on it. In a nutshell, one has to be able to acknowledge the message transmitted in the art in order to see the value of it.
~some suggestions~
1. You use “one” to indicate people, but you may consider replacing it with “someone” or something else.
2. In the story part, it is not quite clearly to me. Try to make it clearer.
"艺术是说事实的一则谎言。" 这是名字是毕卡索和它的一个西班牙画家的出名引证示范对那些谁没有了解重要性，艺术容易以感激一个视力感的各种不同的外表被定义为被装饰的艺术品。 然而, 到那些谁了解申请艺术和它的真实意义, 艺术是像一块使文学的产生关系工作, 一意义深长的歌, 和一押韵诗一必须分解而且分析为了要完全了解信息在艺术沟通了, 和只有这些人知道艺术是尝试默默地表达的事实是什么。 除了那之外，艺术只是显示如一个无生命的和加工的物体但是什么也没指出, 好像一则谎言。 给这的一个好例子会是故事乔伊斯颂歌 Oates 的 "你正要去哪里 , 你去了哪里 ," 。 作家使用艺术的许多方法提高故事而且使读者有印象。 她重复地应用到故事, 像是音乐的许多主题, fa?把棒的感觉和印象做记号于读者的 ade 和呼吸当他们读她的文学。 然而, 因为每个人每天做是如此的一个平常的行动，所以在这些主题之中，人在故事的不同阶段中让不理睬的趋向康妮的描述呼吸。 然而，如果一注意并且有呼吸为什么在故事的部份中带一个主要的角色的好理解,当它去的时候，他正在占据心的故事和正在以故事共呜。另一方面，如果一想关于呼吸的外表但是字的线无,他显然地忽视作家已经穿上它的价值。 简言之, 一必须能够承认在艺术被传输为了要见到它的价值的信息。
"艺术是说事实的一则谎言。" 这是名字是毕卡索和它的一个西班牙画家的出名引证示范对那些谁没有了解重要性，艺术容易以感激一个视力感的各种不同的外表被定义为被装饰的艺术品。 然而, 到那些谁了解申请艺术和它的真实意义, 艺术是像一块使文学的产生关系工作, 一意义深长的歌, 和一押韵诗一必须分解而且分析为了要完全了解信息在艺术沟通了, 和只有这些人知道艺术是尝试默默地表达的事实是什么。 除了那之外，艺术只是显示如一个无生命的和加工的物体但是什么也没指出, 好像一则谎言。 给这的一个好例子会是故事乔伊斯颂歌 Oates 的 "你正要去哪里 , 你去了哪里 ," 。 作家使用艺术的许多方法提高故事而且使读者有印象。 她重复地应用到故事, 像是音乐的许多主题, fa?把棒的感觉和印象做记号于读者的 ade 和呼吸当他们读她的文学。 然而, 因为每个人每天做是如此的一个平常的行动，所以在这些主题之中，人在故事的不同阶段中让不理睬的趋向康妮的描述呼吸。 然而，如果一注意并且有呼吸为什么在故事的部份中带一个主要的角色的好理解,当它去的时候，他正在占据心的故事和正在以故事共呜。另一方面，如果一想关于呼吸的外表但是字的线无,他显然地忽视作家已经穿上它的价值。 简言之, 一必须能够承认在艺术被传输为了要见到它的价值的信息。
回答者：炫ヾ火炎焱燚 - 经理 五级 4-20 11:22
"艺术是说事实的一则谎言。" 这是名字是毕卡索和它的一个西班牙画家的出名引证示范对那些谁没有了解重要性，艺术容易以感激一个视力感的各种不同的外表被定义为被装饰的艺术品。 然而, 到那些谁了解申请艺术和它的真实意义, 艺术是像一块使文学的产生关系工作, 一意义深长的歌, 和一押韵诗一必须分解而且分析为了要完全了解信息在艺术沟通了, 和只有这些人知道艺术是尝试默默地表达的事实是什么。 除了那之外，艺术只是显示如一个无生命的和加工的物体但是什么也没指出, 好像一则谎言。 给这的一个好例子会是故事乔伊斯颂歌 Oates 的 "你正要去哪里 , 你去了哪里 ," 。 作家使用艺术的许多方法提高故事而且使读者有印象。 她重复地应用到故事, 像是音乐的许多主题, fa?把棒的感觉和印象做记号于读者的 ade 和呼吸当他们读她的文学。 然而, 因为每个人每天做是如此的一个平常的行动，所以在这些主题之中，人在故事的不同阶段中让不理睬的趋向康妮的描述呼吸。 然而，如果一注意并且有呼吸为什么在故事的部份中带一个主要的角色的好理解,当它去的时候，他正在占据心的故事和正在以故事共呜。另一方面，如果一想关于呼吸的外表但是字的线无,他显然地忽视作家已经穿上它的价值。 简言之, 一必须能够承认在艺术被传输为了要见到它的价值的信息。