家庭酒窖效果图:短文改错

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The day before the speech contest English teacher---1( )
talked to me.She said that she and my schoolmate all wished-2( )
me success,but it didn't matter that I would win or not.-3( )
when I was on the stage the next day,I felt so nervous-4( )
as I didn't know what to say.There were so many people present!-5( )
Suddenly,I saw my English teacher is standing in the crowd.6-( )
She was smiling but nodding at me.I rememberd-7( )
her words and calmed down.I did a good job and win the first-8( )
prize,Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library.-9()
Whenever I see them I will often think of my English teacher.-10( )

这是2000年的全国高考题的改错题

解析

1. my English。该题考查代词,绝大部分考生知道English teacher前少一个词语,但很多人都误加上了our, an或the,而后面两次出现my English teacher,因而本题实际考查学生对文章内容的理解。

2. schoolmate → schoolmates。schoolmate应为复数形式。

3. that → whether。whether与后面的or not相呼应。

4. 正确。

5. as → that。把as 改成that,组成so … that结构。

6. a去掉。catch sight of是固定短语。

7.but → and 。意义的转折用but,意思并列用and。

8. calm → calmed。remembered和calmed是对应的。

9. is → are。主语用and 连接,谓语动词用are。

10. often去掉。often多余。

这样,我将这道题从头做一遍,你再看看好吗?
The day before the speech contest English teacher---1( my english teacher )
talked to me.She said that she and my schoolmate all wished-2( schoolmates )
me success,but it didn't matter that I would win or not.-3( that改成whether )
when I was on the stage the next day,I felt so nervous-4( 正确 )
as I didn't know what to say.There were so many people present!-5( as改成that )
Suddenly,I saw my English teacher is standing in the crowd.6-( is去掉 )
She was smiling but nodding at me.I rememberd-7( but 改成and )
her words and calmed down.I did a good job and win the first-8( won )
prize,Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library.-9( is改成are)
Whenever I see them I will often think of my English teacher.-10( 去掉often )

1-English前加the或者my
2-schoolmate变为schoolmates
3-that变为whether
4-没错
5-as变为that
6-去掉is
7-but变为and
8-win变为won
9-is变为are
10-去掉often

the English teacher
my schoolmate and she
that if I
全对
as---that
去掉is
but---and
win---won
is---are
去掉will

The day before the speech contest the English Teacher talked to me. She said that she and my schoolmates all wished me success, but it didn't matter whether I would win or not. When I was on the stage the next day, I felt so nervous that I didn't know what to say. There were so many people present! Suddenly, I saw my English teacher standing in the crowd. She was smiling and nodding at me. I remembered her words and calmed down. I did a good job and won the first prize. Now my picture and the prize are hanging in the library. Whenever I see them I often think of my English Teacher.