穿越仙三之守护龙葵:关于not only,but also

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Not only you can read some famous books that improve your knowledge but also this way can not waste your time ,so that you can read more and more useful books.请问这句话有语病吗?要怎么样改正呢?谢谢帮忙解答一下。

You can read some famous books which can not only improve your knowledge but also not waste your time so that you can read more useful books.
not only...but also...两者后跟的成分和结构都要相同,所以这里用了一个定语从句,后面跟的都是can后的动词成分(分别是肯定和否定),另外many的比较级是more,不需要重复用more and more

you can read some famous books Not only improve your knowledge but also this way can not waste your time so that you can read more and more useful books.我觉得顺序是这样的