快乐星球防火墙扮演者:高考英语问题短文改错

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I went to see film after.On my way to the_________

cinema,I met an old English woman,she had lost her_____________

way.I gave up the chance to see the film,walking towards________

her and took her to her hotel.While go there,I told her______

great change had taken place in the past few years and she _______

told me something about britain and her family________

Though I missed the film,however I felt very happy,______

for i not only helped the old lady out from trouble but also_______

practise my spoken English. If I didn't worked hard at ______

English,I would have been able to help her____________

I went to see film after.On my way to the_________ after用错了

cinema,I met an old English woman,she had lost her_____________ had多余

way.I gave up the chance to see the film,walking towards________walking应该写成walked

her and took her to her hotel.While go there,I told her______ go应该写成going

great change had taken place in the past few years and she _______ chiange是不是加s ??

told me something about britain and her family________ britain的b要大写

Though I missed the film,however I felt very happy,______ however多余

for i not only helped the old lady out from trouble but also_______ i要大写成I

practise my spoken English. If I didn't worked hard at ______ worked去掉ed,用原形

English,I would have been able to help her____________加一个not

不一定正确,仅供参考。汗~~好久没用过,好多都模糊了。

I went to see film after.On my way to the_________ after改later,如果是介词after 后面必须跟一个状态或事件

cinema,I met an old English woman,she had lost her_____________ had去掉,迷路就是迷路,表示一个状态,不需要用过去完成时。

way.I gave up the chance to see the film,walking towards________walking改walked, gave up 放弃和walked走过去是依次做的动作。

her and took her to her hotel.While go there,I told her______ go改going,因为前面的While

great change had taken place in the past few years and she _______ change改changes,因为变化都是复数的

told me something about britain and her family________ britain改Britain,国名首字大写

Though I missed the film,however I felt very happy,______ however去掉,与Though同样表示转折的意思

for i not only helped the old lady out from trouble but also_______ i要大写成I ****见最后

practise my spoken English. If I didn't worked hard at ______ worked改work,didn't 后面用原形 ****见最后

English,I would have been able to help her____________ would改would not

改了之后发现和楼上一样,哎,不过还是有点不太确定的地方

看下这句话
Though I missed the film, I felt very happy, for I not only helped the old lady out from trouble but also practise* my spoken English
参考词霸
“在正式写作中,not only…but also 结构应这样用: 每一个成分后都跟一个相同形式的结构。 当第二部分只是强调第一部分时,在not only 结构里 also 通常省略:
He not only wanted the diamond but wanted it desperately.
他不仅想要钻石,而且想要得要命”
可见practise在这个句子中应该是practised来保持与helped一致才对嘛