高校问答2017高考数学大纲:帮忙改改，谢谢啦
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我英文很差，写了几句话，总是觉得老别扭。
我是想说，我是一个幼儿园老师，我非常爱我的学生，我会为了我们的教育尽自己最大的努力，现在我要给你们讲一个故事。
各位看看帮忙改改哈。谢谢了。
I am a kindergarten teacher.
I love my students very much.
I will do my best for our education.
Now，I"d like to tell a story for you.
我是想说，我是一个幼儿园老师，我非常爱我的学生，我会为了我们的教育尽自己最大的努力，现在我要给你们讲一个故事。
各位看看帮忙改改哈。谢谢了。
I am a kindergarten teacher.
I love my students very much.
I will do my best for our education.
Now，I"d like to tell a story for you.
就最后一句。
应该是 Now，I’d like to tell you a story.
或 Now，I'd like to tell a story to you.
还有，既然你是幼儿园老师，不应该称学生为students,
应为pupils.
写的不错。除最后一句不太好外，其余都可以。但总以 I 开头，一个个并列起来，显得单调。给你个参考：
I am a kindergarten teacher, and I love my students very much. For our education, I shall do my best. Now, I'd like to tell you a story.
另外，For our education, I shall do my best. 也可作：I shall devote my life to the educational enterprise of our country. 或者 简单说成 I shall devote myself to education.
应该没什么大问题吧最后一句：
now,I will tell a story to you
更合适吧