高校问答giantess漫画资源:大学英语四级作文修改
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Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a letter to a good friend John,congratulating him on his admission to a famous unviversity.You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in chinese
1对朋友加入大学表示祝贺
2介绍大学生活和中学生活的异同
3对如何成功过好大学生活提出自己的建议
我写的作文如下！
Dear John
I am glad to hear that you have been accepted by a famous univercity.Congratulations!I think you must work hard and then you receive gain now
As you know ,when you enter into univercity ,it means you are no longer a senior school student.There are many diffrences between senior school and univercity.Frist,you will have much free time inunivercity.Second,there are many chances you will have .Because during univercity life the school will hold many activies. Third,you should learn how to study by yourself
In order to lead a good life in your univercity,you should take more activity to practice yourself.On the other hand,study is also important.
Anyhow,I wish you everything will go well
Best wishes for you
Yours
2006.05.20
by a famous univercity:拼写错误
you must work hard ：you must have worked hard
senior school student:senior hign school
have much free time :much more
take more activity : more activities
to practice yourself: practice different skills
不光是语法，内容也要好好修改一下。。。
原文修改如下：所有的univercity 应为university
Dear John （加：）
I am glad to hear that you have been accepted （把accept改为enrolled:意思是：录取）by a famous univercity.Congratulations!I think you must（改为should表示作者的观点） work hard and then you (加will)receive gain(改为success) now (again)
As you know ,when you enter into (加the)univercity ,it means you are no longer a senior(加middle) school student.There are many diffrences between senior(加middle) school and univercity.Fristly,you will have much free time in univercity.(可在这里举例来说明)Secondly,there are many chances you will have (meet机遇是遇到,但关键在把握).Because during univercity life, the school will hold many activies. Thirdly,you should learn how to study by yourself
In order to lead (改为have)a good (加campus:校园)life in your univercity,you should take more activity to practice (practise )yourself.On the other hand(应该与On the one hand句对应,但它在哪里?)study is also important.
Anyhow,I wish you everything will go well
Best wishes for(for改to或删去for you 更简洁) you
Yours
2006.05.20
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