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Saturday,may 13,2006 sunny.
interesting place
It was friday afternoon.as usual ,I went to class.after a time,my friend Tom walked up to me and said that would invit me to go to his house.after school ,Tom took me to the sandlot.It was surprised .I saw a lot of houses that was made up of sand,another was made up of paper."Do you come in ?"Tom said.Is it your house? I said. "Yes,"tom said smiling. In time,I told tom about ,let's go.
Saturday,may 13,2006 sunny.
interesting place
It was friday afternoon.as usual ,I went to class.after a time,my friend Tom walked up to me and said that would invit me to go to his house.after school ,Tom took me to the sandlot.It was surprised .I saw a lot of houses that was made up of sand,another was made up of paper."Do you come in ?"Tom said.Is it your house? I said. "Yes,"tom said smiling. In time,I told tom about ,let's go.
said that "he "would
"I" was surprised
houses ,one was made up of sand,another was made up of paper这一句不能用that 引从句
没错啊！！！