庚寅日柱男命很不好:谁能帮我按下面的命题用英语写几句话啊?

1.My favourite sports is playing pingpang.Just because it's easy to learn.(我最喜欢的运动的打乒乓球，就只是因为它非常的好学!)
2.I don't like the weather which I live in. It's so hot in summer,I can't stand with it!(我不喜欢我所在城市的气候，夏天太热了,我受不了! )
3.I like light music best.when I listen to it,I'll calm down then,and can do what I want do well.(我喜欢轻音乐，因为听它们的时候我比较安静，可以做好我想做的事情.)
4.After graduation,I'll go to a company no matter what kind of company it is .what I care is whether 5.I like it or not,whether I can earn the money I need.(毕业后，我)
6.If I have extra money ,I will use them to buy some closes,something I'd like to buy for I don't want to wrong myself.Earned money is used to spend ,we can make money late.
7.Zhou enlai ,he is a great person I admire.
8.I don't have any specail expercience,but everyone is a special one.

晕1楼的，错误太多了吧，刚好，反正准备6级要做改错
1.sports---sport最好是改成my most favourite sport,然后playing pingpang改pingpang或者table tennis
My most favourite sport is table tennis.just because it's easy to learn.
2.which改where,不然就是修饰the weather,stand with短语意思是同...一致或者和...站在一起，丝毫没有承受的意思
I don't like the weather where I live in.It's so hot in summer,I can't endure it
3.轻音乐不是light而是soft,后面then一般用来表示然后，在那时候一般用at that time直接删除就好了，中间的逗号不要can也要删除
I like soft music best.when I listen to it,I'll calm down and do what I want do well
4有了whether就不需要or not
After graduation,I'll go to a company no matter what kind of company it is .what I care is whether I like it,whether I can earn the money I need
第五个不知道你放哪去了，也许是忘了写
6.wrong是形容词或者名词，不能拿来用动词
we can make money late.这里要用later

貌似一个问题10句话左右

1.Table tennis is my most favourable sport because it carried my memory.It was a interest memory that I meet my best friend first time at the table used to play pingpong.We are both good at it and both of us havn't meet athelet who can compare with us.it's really a fierce competition that we indulge in playing absolutly.Five hours later it was evening,both of us forgot the time and the scores,just smiled at each other fatiguely.From that day on,we bacame close friends and pingpong as me is not only a king of sports but a sweet memory.
乒乓是我最喜欢的运动因为它带这我一段回忆。这是一段很有趣的经历，那时在乒乓球桌第一次见到我最好的朋友。我们都很会打乒乓，并且很久都没有碰到对手。那真是一个激烈的比赛，我们都完全沉浸在乒乓的比赛之中。五个小时后的夜晚，我们都忘记了时间和分数，只是微笑的看着对方。从那天起，我们成为了好朋友，乒乓对于我，不仅是一项运动同时夹带着一段美好的回忆
2.I don't like the weather where I live in.The city is on the south of China,so you can hardly see snow in winter and can't afford the high temperature in summer.Once rained,it would continued several days which had incured flood just as the scene you may see from TV.The odd trait of the city's weather is never be forecasted by the satellite...
我不喜欢我居住地方的天气。这是个南方的城市，所以在冬天你几乎看不到雪在夏天你几乎不能忍受高温。一旦下午，它将持续好几天并且曾经导致洪水泛滥--就像你从电视上曾经看到的那样。这个城市的天气还有一个特点是，从来就不被卫星准确的预测到。。。

1.My favourite sports is playing pingpang.Just because it's easy to learn.(我最喜欢的运动的打乒乓球，就只是因为它非常的好学!)
2.I don't like the weather which I live in. It's so hot in summer,I can't stand with it!(我不喜欢我所在城市的气候，夏天太热了,我受不了! )
3.I like light music best.when I listen to it,I'll calm down then,and can do what I want do well.(我喜欢轻音乐，因为听它们的时候我比较安静，可以做好我想做的事情.)
4.After graduation,I'll go to a company no matter what kind of company it is .what I care is whether 5.I like it or not,whether I can earn the money I need.(毕业后，我)
6.If I have extra money ,I will use them to buy some closes,something I'd like to buy for I don't want to wrong myself.Earned money is used to spend ,we can make money late.
7.Zhou enlai ,he is a great person I admire.
8.I don't have any specail expercience,but everyone is a special one.