映山红钢琴曲谱:翻译:1,我的心每跳动一下,我就想念你一次

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I MISS YOU WITH EVERY BEAT OF MY HEART

As soon as my heart beats one time,I will have you in my heart once.

楼主,用as soon as的结构更突出你要表达的意思,

只要我的心跳动一次,我就想....更能表达急切的感觉,
你说呢,爱情的话题翻译需要适当的夸张,也需要适当的浪漫,想你,翻译可以多种,我用的是在我心里头有你,呵呵,
多切磋!

For every one of my heart beat, i will think of you once.

my heart beat while I miss you~

With every beat of my heart, I miss you all the time.

For every beating of my heart, i miss you