高校问答2个月宝宝吵夜怎么办:可不可以帮我看看这偏文章~~~谢谢
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Good afternoon, everyone. I m XXX. Today I’d like to tell u the disadvantages about overpopulation.
As the world is developing, our life has had a great improvement. At the same time, we also got lots of problems against to. One of the most serious problems is overpopulation.
It has brought us so many troubles.
Firstly, as the population continues to increasing, more and more farming lands and living spaces are required. We also need plenty of natural resources. In fact, the world can not contain that much population, and according to some experts, some of the natural resources will be depleted in recent years.
In addition, a city will be crowded if it has too high population. More people buying a car can cause air-pollution, the rise of traffic jam.
Some of the countries in Africa, they have a high birthrate. Children can not eat enough, don’t have school for studying. They are under the standard of living. Governments try to solve those problems, but it has to spend a long time. So what we can do is : to support the policies of government, because the same problems also happened in many Asian countries, even China. So I hope all of u can help it as much as u can. Remember, we are all the members of the world, aren’t we?
Thank you.
是一个speech，各位能不能帮我修改一下不对的地方和改得好一点
顺便我的开头可以么，但我想写的不那么普通，能不能帮帮忙
顺便想加多一个反问句进去，
希望各位帮帮忙~~~~~
谢谢
On Overpopulation
Distinguished guests,lasies and gentlemen,Good afternoon.(用everyone太口语，不正式) Now, I’d like to show you the disadvantages of overpopulation. (不是必要的话，不要说我是某某人，因为你上台时会有人介绍的)
Owing to the development of the world, our life is improving with a great many of problems emerging at the same time. One of those most serious problems is overpopulation which has brought to us so many troubles.
Firstly, more and more farming lands and living spaces are occupied as a result of the increase of population. We also need plenty of natural resources. In fact, the world could not stand so many inhabitants . According to some experts, some of the natural resources will be depleted in recent years.
In addition, a city will be mush crowded with too many residents.
The increase of private cars will cause air-pollution as well as traffic jam.
In Africa, some countries have a high birthrate. Children, who are below the living standard, fail to eat enough or study in schools. It takes time for the governments to settle the problems. Thus, what we can do is to support the policies of government as the case is the same in many Asian countries including China. So I hope all of us can give our help as much as we can. Remember, we are all the members of this world, aren’t we?
Thank you.
文章不用在开头加反问句了，中间改动的比较多。你自己再斟酌斟酌。拙见。望有助！
Good afternoon,everyone. I'm *** from ***. Today I stand here to show you the man-made disaster which will lead us to an tragic future--overpopulation. What I can do may be inappreciable, but I hope that from now on, more and more people will find the importance of this problem from my speech.
开头,不好意思,水平有限,加不进去反问句.