高校问答张慧珍 蒙面歌王:该如何翻译呢？
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2下面是新来的两名员工的信息．
A 移动电话：11214551111 职务是技术支持
B 移动电话：11111111111职务是技术支持
朋友们怎么才能呢把一句话更好的翻译出来呢．比如上面的我可以这样翻译吗？
There are two new employees in Beijing office .They are A and B .Please open the mailboxes for them.If they are opened ,please let me know it.开通这个词可以用OPEN 吗？
Below is some messages about new employees.
A mobile phone....... technic support
B mobile phone....... technic support
其实我觉得有些句子不是很复杂，但就是感觉翻译不好．讲讲经验和窍门吧，多谢各位了．
1 北京办事处新来了两名员工，他们是A和B，请为他们开通邮箱，如果开通了，请告诉我．谢谢．(A 和B是人名）
Two new employees A and B come into our office in beijin, please permit their mailboxes for them, if done please inform me, thank you!
2下面是新来的两名员工的信息．
The information of the two employees are as follows:
A 移动电话：11214551111 职务是技术支持
B 移动电话：11111111111职务是技术支持
A mobile telephone:.........
please register the mailbox for two new employees, A and B. tell me after their opening. thanks
the following are some data for the two news:
A Mobile Phone: Post; technic suport
B Mobile Phone: Post; technic suport
There are two newly coming employees A and B in Beijing Office.Please register E-mails for them and inform me after you do that. Thanks!
Hereinafter are the recommendations(or brief introduction)of the two.
A:duty:mobile telephone......technology assist
B:duty:mobile telephone......technology assist
你看这样翻译可以吗?
“开通”不应该直接翻为open，这是chinglish，应该用注册registration
还有，“下面”不是below，应用“the following ... are...”更好