木头材质:帮我的英语作文纠纠错

four month ago.I had a accident.
the accident is I broken my left leg.then I felt scared when I lose a lot of blood.What should we do?
the frist. I with cotton moisten ethyl alocholwash my wiund, in order to avoid the wound infect of bacteria.
afterwards I call my classmate help me,substitute for me call my school's doctor group me wipe medicine on my leg wound.
final I at my home recuperate.

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订正如下：
第一句four month ago.I had a accident
f要大写,accient是元音开头,要用an,broken应改为broke

第二句the accident is I broken my left leg.
t要大写,事故发生在4个月之前,应用过去时,is应改为was

第三句then I felt scared when I lose a lot of blood.
t要大写,scare是动词,应改为形容词,可以用frightened,lose应用过去式

第四句What should we do?
把we改为I,shoule最好改为could

第五句the frist
改为At the first.

第六句I with cotton moisten ethyl alocholwash my wiund, in order to avoid the wound infect of bacteria.
这句话……好多错单词啊ethyl、alocholwash、wiund……！你的大概意思是不是：我用沾有乙烯的脱脂棉擦拭我的伤口，以防伤口被细菌所感染？如果是，我跟你翻译了一下：
I uesd the moisten cotton with ethylene to wash my wound，in order to avoid the wound infect by bacteria.

第七句afterwards I call my classmate help me,substitute for me call my school's doctor group me wipe medicine on my leg wound.
a要大写，afterwards与I中间要加逗号，call要用过去式，且整句要用动词不定式，substitute是动词，不可以用来开头，后半句是中文是英语，应该改为：Afterwards ,I called my classmates to help me.They called school's doctor group for me.The doctors wipe medicine on my wound.

第八句final I at my home recuperate.
final是形容词,在这里应该用副词finally,且f要大写,I是代词,at是介词,不可以连用,整句应改为:Finally, I arrined my home and recuperated.

全文如下:
Four month ago.I had an accident.The accident was I broke my left leg.Then I felt friehtened when I lost a lot of blood.What could I do?
At the first.I uesd the moisten cotton with ethylene to wash my wound，in order to avoid the wound infect bybacteria.Afterwards ,I called my classmates to help me.They called school's doctor group for me.The doctors wipe the medicine on my wound.Finally, I arrined my home and recuperated.

Four month ago, I had undergone an accident.
The accident made my left leg broken.
Then I was scared when the blood trickled down my leg.
What shall I do?
First,I used moisten ethyl cotton to wipe the wound in order to avoid the wound would be infected by the bacteria.
Then, I called my classmate to help me,they take the place of the school doctor to wipe lotion on the wound.
At last, I recovered at home.

孩子，为什么不用简单的词呢？非要用复杂的词，这样很吃力的。

four monthes ago.I had a accident.
the accident was I broke my left leg.then I felt scared when I bleeding.What should I do?
frist. I with cotton moisten ethyl alocholwash my wound, in order to avoid the wound infecting by bacteria.
afterwards I called my classmate to help me,substitute for me call my school's doctor group me wipe medicine on my leg wound.
final I reached home recuperate. 你的文章有点让人发指，如果你想比较好的完成任务的话，你可要了解多一点的英语文化。问中有些句子可能让人无法理解。用英语讲就是;That does not make sence。革命尚为成功，同志仍需努力。

1.句首每个英语单词要大写.
2.Four mouth改成 Four mouths
3.I had a accident,---I got an accident
4.What should we do?--What should I do?
5.去掉the first
还有很多小问题。你的是中式英语。

four month ，month后加s, a 改为an .
晕，错误太多了

the accident is I broken my left leg
语法错误