上单船长教学:各位英语高手来帮哈忙翻译一下!!!

上面的一看就是机器翻译的。
One day,I went traveling by ship with my friends.But we were caught by a storm half way.The ship was broken and it sank.All the people except me died.I grabbed a
piece of wood and struggled in the writhing waves.I found an island in mistiness.Suddenly a big wave hit me,and then I lost my consciousness.
When I woke up,I found myself had been washed onto the seashore.With the feeling of hunger and thirst,I decided to make an adventure on the island.There was no people on the island,but it was not so desolate.There are many trees on the island,and a lot of enticing fruits were hung on the trees.Clear water wound its way through the slot of the stones.There were lots of small wild animals running on the grassland.I really wanted to catch one and roast it,but I dont have any tools to do so.At last,I had to give up.
I spent a lot of days on the island by eating the fruits and drink water.The days on the island was quite leisurable but a little boring.I swam in the sea and basked on the beach alone all day.No one could accompany me by talking to me and playing with me.I felt lonely.One morning,when I comfortably opened my eyes on the beach,a contour of ship showed up in my eye sight.I was pleasantly surprised.
Hurriedly,I sent a signal to it.I shouted excitedly when I found it was coming towards me.At last,I went on the board and was saved.

一天，我和同伴们乘船去旅行，但是在途中遇上了暴风雨，船坏了，除了我以外每个人都溺水身亡了。我拼命地紧抓住一块木版，在翻腾的海浪中挣扎，模糊中我发现了一个岛，突然一个巨浪打来，然后我就什么都不知道了。
当我醒来时，我发现自己已经被海浪冲到了小岛上。又饥又渴的我决定先在岛上探险一番。这个岛上没有居民，却不是那么荒凉，岛上有很多树，树上结满了诱人的果实，石头缝中还流淌着清澈的泉水。草地上有一些小型的野生动物在奔跑，如野兔，我很想把它们抓住用来烧烤着吃，但是我没有任何的捕猎工具，最后只好放弃。
我在岛上靠吃水果和喝水度过了许多天，每天都很悠闲但有一点无聊。我独自一人在海中游泳和躺在沙滩上晒太阳，没有一个人陪在我身边和我说话或是嬉戏，我感到孤独。一天早晨，我在沙滩上惬意地睁开眼睛，惊喜地发现在海平面上有船的影子，我急忙对它发出信号，看它向我开来时，我兴奋得大叫起来。最后我搭上了船，得救了。
My friends and I went travelling by ship one day.But our trip was destroyed by a storm on the way,so the ship broke down .All my friends were drowned. I was lucky enough to hold on to a piece of wood in the water. As I was struggling against the huge waves, I found that I got near to an island. Suddenly another huge wave stroked me out of my consciousness.
When I woke up the next day, I found myself lying on the island . Being hungry and thirsty, I decided to explore the island . There were no denizens on the island, but it was not so deserted .The island was surrounded by a lot of trees with fresh fruits.Clear fountains were found between the rocks. Small wild animals, such as rabbits, were running and I’d really like to catch some for barbecuing. Being lack of tools,I wasn't able to catch them
I lived on fruits and water for quite a few days after that; everyday was ease but boring. I swam in the sea and then bathed in the sun on the beach . I felt so lonely because there wasn't anybody who can talk to me or stay with me.One morning when I opened my eyes easely , I saw a shadow of a ship on the sea.!I signaled it at once and outcryed excitedly when I saw it driving towards me. Finally I got on the ship .I was saved.

累死人了……终于弄完了

Day, I take a trip with the companions embarkation, but ran into storm on the way, the ship is out of order , in addition to me everybody was drowned to die.I hold tight a piece of wood version strongly and tightly, flounder in seethe of the wave, I discovered an island in the faintness, suddenly a billow is beat, then I what all know.
When I wake up, I discover the oneself is already hurtle by wave to islet up.Both hungry and thirsty of I decide first to explore in the island nearly some kind of.There are no residents on this island, but isn't so desolate, there are a lot of trees on the island, on the tree laden with captivating fruit, the rock sew medium still flow to drip pure spring.There are some small scaled wildlifes on the lawn Be rush, such as the hare, I want to hold tight them to use very much to roast to eat, but I didn't catch to hunt tool anily, having to give up finally.
I depend to drink water a fruit and drank a water to spend for many days on the island, all very leisurely and carefree everyday but have 1:00 boredom.I swim and lie a person alone and in the sea to take a sunbathe on the sandy beach, having no a person to accompany to talk or play around with me nearby at me, I feel standing alone.A day morning, I open eyes pleasingly on the sandy beach, surprised pleasedly the detection has the shadow of the ship on the sea level, I send out signal to it quickly, seeing it toward me open to come, my excitement have to shout loudly.I take finally up ship, save.

看看我的.
My friends and I went on traveling in a ship one day. Our trip was destroyed by a storm on the way: the ship was racked and everybody was drawn in the sea except me. I was lucky enough to hold on to a piece of wood in the water. As I was struggling against the huge waves, I sensed that I was near an island. Suddenly another huge wave stroked me out of my consciousness.
When I woke up the next day, I found myself lying on the island already. Out of hungry and thirsty, I decided to explore the island first. There were no habitants on the island, but it was not deserted at all: plenty of trees surrounded the island and the fruits looked really tasty. Clear fountains were found between the rocks. Small wild animals, such as rabbits, were running in the grass and I’d really like to catch some for my barbeque. But I have to give up the idea for the lack of hunting tools.
I lived on fruits and water for quite a few days after that; everyday was slow but boring. I swam in the sea and then bathed in the sun on the beach all by myself. I felt so lonely with no company to talk to or play with.
Then I opened my eyes one morning on the beach and out of my ecstasy, I saw the shadow of a ship on the sea. I signaled it at once and shouted excitedly when I saw it drove towards me. As I got on the ship finally, I was saved.

注 adidas0330回答有一些语法和拼写错误

One day, the companions and I ride the ship to travel, but on the way
meeting the storm, the ship has been bad,all the people was drowned
besides me died. I go all out tightly to hold together the wood
engraving, struggles in the tuck dive ocean waves, fuzzy center I had
discovered an island, suddenly very rough sea waves hit, then my
anything does not know. When I woke, I discovered oneself is already
flushed by the ocean waves on the island. Also hungry and thirsty,so I
decided first explores on the island. On this island does not have the
inhabitant, actually is not that bleak, on the island had very many
trees, on the tree the knot has filled the attractive fruit, in the
stone seam also the flow limpid water seepage. On the lawn has some
small wild animals to run, if the hare, I very wants to hold them uses
for to bake is eating, but I do not have any to hunt for the tool,
finally has to give up. I depended in the island eat the fruit and
drink water passed many days, very was every day leisurely and
carefree but has bored. An my alone person the swimming and lies down
in the sea in the sand beach exposes to the sun ,a person has
not accompanied in my side and I speaks perhaps play, I feel very lonely.
One day morning, I satisfied opening the eye in the sand beach, pleasantly
surprised discovered has the ship in the sea level the shadow, I
hurriedly send out the signal to it,and looked it when comes to me, I am
excited loudly cry out. Finally I built embarked, miraculously saved!

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『One day,my partners and i go tracelling by boat. But on our way we meet the rain. It's rain dogs and cats. The boat was broken. Every one was drown except me.
I grabbed a board in the terrifing waves! I saw an island absentminded, but there's a big wave! I wouldn't know what's going on.
When I waked, I found that I was on the island by wave! Although I was so hungry and thirsty, I decided to have an adventure on the secret island!
There was no human on it, but it was not a barren island. There were trees that have so many attractive berries on it and clean water in the stone. On the grass there were some little animals which were running, just like hares. I really wanted to catch them for my lunch, but I found I haven't any tools. Finally it was just a dream!
I spent a lot of days on the island by eating the fruits and drinking water. The days on the island was quite leisurable but a little boring. I swam in the sea and basked on the beach alone all day. No one could accompany me by talking to me and playing with me so I felt lonely. One morning,when I comfortably opened my eyes on the beach,a contour of ship showed up in my eye sight.I was pleasantly surprised.
Hurriedly,I sent a signal to it.I shouted excitedly when I found it was coming towards me.At last,I went on the board and was saved. 』

★★★谁来帮我翻译下??要求没有任何语法错误!请不要逐个逐个地那种白痴翻译!!谢谢!!我要速度!!
Who can trans late this for me?? My rule is: No any gramma misstake!Not learn some fool who translate one by one!! Thanks a lot!! My rule is speed!★★★

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