高校问答三国时期平原相:我有一片英语文章，请高手帮我修改
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One day while I was smoking in bed, I went to sleep unconsciously. After some time, however, I suddenly woke up with a start, and realized that the bed sheet was burning with smoke. Although I jumped up immediately and used a wet cloth to put the fire out, there was a big hole in the sheet, at which I would regret for a long time.
谢谢maryswallow,但这篇文章的要求是使用不超过3句话，请帮我再看看
谢谢maryswallow,但这篇文章的要求是使用不超过3句话，请帮我再看看
One day I was smoking in bed.Ater a while I went to sleep .I didn't know how long I had been sleeping. Somehow, I woke up with a start and I realized that the bed sheet was burning . I jumped up immediately and used a wet cloth to put the fire out. There was a big hole in the sheet, at which I would regret for a long time.
写得很好.我做小小该动.睡着觉就是不知道了,不必再用unconsciously