火影忍者疾风传彩蛋:英语找错误

if后+主语everyone

believe前+主语we

there is only one you 改成You're one and only.(one and only [简明英汉词典]adj.唯一的)

and前用",".

you can pass this way only once 该成you have only one chance to pass this way.

I also like English very much. I think everyone can stiduy English well if working hard. Believe in youself and show yourself! You have only one opportunity to pass it,so do it well.
理由:后面用分词working hard表条件;后面加了show oneself,表示"相信自已,展示自我",最后一句调整了一下结构,表明:你只有一次机会去学习,所以要学好.

i also like english very much .i think everyone can study english
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very well if work hard.believe in yourself.there is only one you
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I also like English very much .I think everyone can studies English
very well if work hard. Believe in yourself. There is only you in the world.And you can pass this way only once. Do it well!