高校问答别告诉爸爸 百度云:找出十处错误
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I usually walk to school on foot.But sometimes I go to school by bus. When my father have time,he takes me to school in car.And my father is very busy,so he don't take me to home.my friend Sam goes to school by bus,he think its cheap and it takes only about ten minute. Sometimes he rides to school. But these days he has to take bus because his bike is broken.
括号中为改正。
my friend Sam goes to school by bus中的my为大写，不知道算不算？
1.I usually walk to school on foot(去掉on foot)
2.When my father have(has) time
3.he takes me to school in(by) car.
4~5.And my father is very busy,so he don't(doesn't) take me to(去掉to) home.
6~7.he think(thinks) its(it's) cheap
8~9.and it takes only(only takes) about ten minute(minutes).
10.his bike is(was) broken.
1walk 和on foot意思重复了
2when my father has time
3by car
4有so就不能用and了
5home是副词 take me home
6....by bus, becuae he think 加连词
7不是its 是it is
8ten minutes
9his bike was broken
10take a bus