黄磊教过周冬雨吗:两篇改错

once work in a factory. On 1
once这里是曾经,,所以work应该用过去式worked

a rain night, all the lights of the factory went 2
rain---->rainy,这个很明显

out all at once. I rushed out but could see 3
but连接的是两个句子,所以后面could前的I不能省

nothing. Fortunately the warned system was 4
warned改为warning,报警系统warning system

direct connected with the police station, and 5
direct改为directly,应该用副词

for three or four minutes four police cars 6
没发现错

arrived at the front gate. The police looked at 7
looked 后的at去掉,用做look的不及物用法

all round the factory, but were found nothing 8
were去掉

unusual. A police told me that the rain must 9
police改为policeman

have affected the electricity system and cause 10
a short circuit.
cause改为caused,完成时态

once work in a factory. On 1 worked
a rain night, all the lights of the factory went 2 rainy
out all at once. I rushed out but could see 3 没错
nothing. Fortunately the warned system was 4 warning
direct connected with the police station, and 5 directly
for three or four minutes four police cars 6 after
arrived at the front gate. The police looked at 7 去掉looked 后面的at
all round the factory, but were found nothing 8 去掉were
unusual. A police told me that the rain must 9 没错
have affected the electricity system and cause 10
a short circuit.

Aeroplanes are slow driving me mad. I live near an 11slowly
airport and passing planes can be heard at night and day. 12 删掉at
The airport was built during the war, but for some reasons 13 reason
it could not be used then. Last year, therefore, it came 14 therefore改为however
to use. Over a hundred people must have been driven 15
away from their homes by the noise. I am one of a few 16 a改为the
people left. Sometimes I think this house will be knock 17 will改为might
down by a passing plane. I have offered a large sum of 18 been offered
money to go away, but I determined to stay here. 19 am determined
Everybody says I must be mad and they are probably right. 20没错

1.worked
2.rainy
3.没错
4.warning
5.directly
6.for==>after
7.at去掉
8.were去掉
9.policeman
10.effected

11.slowly
12.at去掉
13.reason
14.therefore==>however
15.to==>into
16.a==>few
17.will==>might
18.have offered 中间加been
19. I determined 中间加am
20.没错

I once work in a factory. On 1 (worked)
a rain night, all the lights of the factory went 2 (rainy)
out all at once. I rushed out but could see 3 (去掉all, 与前文的all 重复了)
nothing. Fortunately the warned system was 4 (warning)
direct connected with the police station, and 5 (directly)
for three or four minutes four police cars 6 (after)
arrived at the front gate. The police looked at 7 (去掉looked 后的at)
all round the factory, but were found nothing 8 (去掉were)
unusual. A police told me that the rain must 9 (没错)
have affected the electricity system and cause 10 (caused)
a short circuit.

Aeroplanes are slow driving me mad. I live near an 11 (slowly)
airport and passing planes can be heard at night and day. 12 (去掉at)
The airport was built during the war, but for some reasons 13 (reason)
it could not be used then. Last year, therefore, it came 14 (therefore改为however)
to use. Over a hundred people must have been driven 15 (去掉must)
away from their homes by the noise. I am one of a few 16 (a改为the)
people left. Sometimes I think this house will be knock 17 (knocked)
down by a passing plane. I have offered a large sum of 18 (have been offered)
money to go away, but I determined to stay here. 19 (I am determined)
Everybody says I must be mad and they are probably right. 20 (没错, 或把mad改为crazy)