普通话推广方案:看看我翻译的怎么样??

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yestoday i helped my younger sister download songs selected by her and felt myself already out of fashion .There are so many new songs i have not heard.what my sister said aslo made me ambarrassed.Well.in the current time,many kinds of english tapes have beening listened by me almost every day,besides bbc,voa and cnn.beyond all this,cctv-9 has become a special music which is always on from morning to night as long as i am at home.In order to pass the hard interprater exam,i am crasy.wish to good news!
昨天给我表妹down歌.发现自己落伍了.好多歌自己都没听过.表妹一个个”现在很流行”把我弄的一愣一愣的.唉!现在每天周旋在各种英语磁带之间,时不时听听bbs,voa和cnn.cctv9响一天... ...为了考interpretor,自己都远离fashion了.希望会有回报!!

到底哪个是被翻译的啊……
英文那一段写得很别扭还有错误
如果中文是译文,怎么还夹英语单词……
很不专业咯

不好,如果真是一个准备翻译考试的人,就应该知道没有体现出besides 和 as long as 在句中的语法作用和逻辑关系有多么致命,再好好想想吧

哈哈,让我也来踩一下场吧,不介意我全翻译一次吧:

昨晚我给我的表妹下载那些她挑选出来的歌才发现我已经落伍了.有很多歌我都没听过以及表妹一个个的说这些很流行的时候让我更尴尬.现在每天周旋在各种英语磁带BBS、VOA、和CNN 之间,除了这些,CCTV9每天都有一些特别的歌让我从早上一直听到晚上,为了这次能通过听力考试,我真差点疯了.希望会如我所愿有好消息!

哈,不知道这样如何呢,好一点吧