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I am LIMINGTAO .Graduate from too at first the city experiment primary school.Very happy can know everyone, and become classmate.My a fondness for is a writing, the oral communication expression ability is also quite good.Although I have many advantages.But there is also the place of many minor faultses.Hope everyone can for correct much and much

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I am Li Mintao, I'm graduated from Taiyuan Experiment Primary School. I'm very happy to meet everyone and to be the classmates.
My hobby is writing, and the ability of my oral express is also good. Although I have many strong points, I also have many poor points. And I want everybody to point my mistakes as often as possible.

My name is Li Mingtao .I graduate from the Taiyuan experiment school .I'm glad to meet you and be classmates with you .I like writting,and my speaking ability is also not bad .Even though I have a lot of advantage, I also have some disadvantage .Please help me correct them no matter when and where. That's all.Thanks.

I am Mr Li. Graduated from Taiyuan city Experimental Primary School. We are pleased to recognize and become classmate. My love is writing and oral communication skills are also good. Although I have many advantages. But there are many defects in common. Hope that we can point to dos