店面促销方案:高手们,请帮改正下列句子:One day ,Xiaohua had picnic together in the zoo.
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应该去掉together吧!而且had 和 together之间最好还要加上a吧!
改正后的应该是:
One day ,Xiaohua had a picnic in the zoo.
One day ,Xiaohua had a picnic in the zoo.