平野绫为什么不火了:可以帮我翻译篇文章。。。

机器翻译虽然快,但是错漏很多,今人啼笑皆非!
这是我自己写的,供参考,望高手指教~~~.
I have been studying in this college for a year so far.Our college has provides us the best learning environment.The fresh air, beautiful lakes, leafy trees give us a safe, quiet and elegantlearning environment. Our college is large and beautiful.The institute has four canteens inside, the shops can facilitate the students everyday needs.Our college has geographical superiority and traffic is very convenient.And the security is very good, it gives the best security for us students. Our college is a standard school, but I think the accommodation environment is not good enough. The dormitoris for us to live in are too narrow. I hope our school can improve our living condition!

College has been a year in the study. College gives us the best learning environment, fresh air, beautiful lakes, leafy and give us a safer learning environment quiet and elegant. Great schools, beautiful, the Institute has four canteens inside, the small shops that can facilitate students everyday needs, and geographical superiority College, the traffic is very convenient. And the security is very good, the best security for students. Our College is a standard school, but I think the environment is not good accommodation, hostels small space. I hope this school improvement

College has been a year in the study. College gives us the best learning environment, fresh air, beautiful lakes, leafy and give us a safer learning environment quiet and elegant. Great schools, beautiful, the Institute has four canteens inside, the small shops that can facilitate students everyday needs, and geographical superiority College, the traffic is very convenient. And the security is very good, the best security for students. Our College is a standard school, but I think the environment is not good accommodation, hostels small space. I hope this school improvement

I have been studying in this college for a year so far.Our college has provides us the best learning environment.The fresh air, beautiful lakes, leafy trees give us a safe, quiet and elegantlearning environment. Our college is large and beautiful.The institute has four canteens inside, the shops can facilitate the students everyday needs.Our college has geographical superiority and traffic is very convenient.And the security is very good, it gives the best security for us students. Our college is a standard school, but I think the accommodation environment is not good enough. The dormitoris for us to live in are too narrow. I hope our school can improve our living condition! 我想这样翻译应该是可以的,当然 你自己再加工下,祝你好运

College has been a year in the study. College gives us the best learning environment, fresh air, beautiful lakes, leafy and give us a safer learning environment quiet and elegant. Great schools, beautiful, the Institute has four canteens inside, the small shops that can facilitate students everyday needs, and geographical superiority College, the traffic is very convenient. And the security is very good, the best security for students. Our College is a standard school, but I think the environment is not good accommodation, hostels small space. I hope this school improvement

在学院读书已经一年了。学院给我们最好的学习环境，有清新的空气，美丽的湖畔，树木茂盛，给我们一个清静幽雅的学习环境。学校很大，很漂亮，学院里面有4个饭堂，有大大小小的商铺，能方便学生日常生活需要，而且学院地理环境优越，所以交通很方便。而且治安很好，给学生最好的安全保障。我们学院是间标准学校，但我觉得住宿环境不好，宿舍空间小。希望学校就此加以改善！

翻译：Have studied for a year in the college.The lake front, tree that college give us best study environment, have the delightfully fresh air, beauty is plentiful, and give us a quiet and tranquil and enjoyable study environment.The school is very big, very beautiful, there are 4 rice halls in the college, and have consumedly the small and small company spread, can demand of convenient student daily life, and college geography the environment is superior, therefore the transportation is very convenient.And the 治 is peaceful very good, guarantee to best safety that student does ever had.Our college is a standard school,but I thought the lodgings environment is not good, the dormitory space is small. Hoped the school performs to improve in light of this!