日语 我知道了:有一篇英语短文想请各位修改修改！！！Thank you very much！

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Last Saturday，my mother and I went on a visit to Beijing.We went there by plane.After I arrived in Beijing，I felt very excited.We visited many places of interest，such as the Great Wall，Tian’anmen Square。But the most interesting thing was to eat the Beijing Duck.In the evening，we arrived home，I was tired.
修改什么都行，主要是一些语法错误，或者是如何写更好！

语法没错啊

the Great Wall---Great Wall
the Beijing Duck---Beijing Duckling

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