铠甲勇士第五季明年拍:请大家修改一篇英语日记

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Today was rainy.So I have to went to the hospital on foot with my mother.I saw my mother contuct an experiment.The experiment was very dangerous.But my mother wasn't scared.I asked her:"Why do you not scared?" My mother answer:"I don't know,maybe... ..."
I think my mother is a successful people!

第一句,was前加it
2 had to go
3 conduct加ing
4 正确
5 正确
6 do改为are
7 answer加ed
最后一句 people改为person.

请自己对照.
Today was rainy.So I had to went to the hospital on foot with my mother.I saw my mother conducting an experiment.The experiment was very dangerous.But my mother wasn't scared.I asked her:"Why are you not scared?" My mother answer:"I don't know,maybe... ..."
I think my mother is a successful person!

It was rainy today.So my mother and I had to go to hospital on foot.I saw her make an experiment,which was very dangerous.But her wasn't scared.I asked her why she was not scared."I don't know,maybe..."
I think my mother is a successful erson!
改了好多,都快边成我的语言了。

It was rainy today, so I have to went to the hospital on foot with my mother.I saw my mother contuct an experiment.The experiment was very dangerous.But my mother wasn't scared.I asked her:"Why do you not scared?" My mother answer:"I don't know,maybe... ..."
I think my mother is a successful people!

我不太明白的你的意思

1楼的回答都对。。
但还有一个错误:why do you not scared?应该改为why are you not scared?/why do you not scare?