李荣浩《李白》歌词:修改一篇英语日记

Today,I have a test for my school.Before the test,we studied hard. I thought:no pain,no gain,so I read my book very "carefully".
"Test is begin!"somebody said.We closed the book,began test.
(One hour later,the test was end.)
"Wow!the question is difficult!" "Yes!" "I think so!" "I agree with you!"... ...It really hundreds respond to a single call!
Whoops!I hope I will have a better grade!

actually,i don't understand what do you mean by "i thought:no pain, no gain." you don't need to change the words in "..." because there are the words what students said.

Today,I had a test in my school.Before the test,We studied hard,I thought:No pians,no gain,So,I read my book very "carefully".
"Test is begun!"somebody said.We closed the book,beginning test.
(One hour later,the test was end.)
"Wow!the question is difficult!" "Yes!" "I think so!" "I agree with you!"... ...It really hundreds respond to a single call!
Whoops!I hope I have a better grade!

Today,I had a test in my school.Before the test,We studied hard,I thought:No pain,no gain,So,I read my book very "carefully".
"Test is begun!"somebody said.We closed the book,beginning test.
(One hour later,the test was over.)
"Wow!the question is difficult!" "Yes!" "I think so!" "I agree with you!"... ...It was really hundreds respond to a single call!
Whoops!I hope I can get high better mark!

Today,I had a test in my school.Before the test,We studied hard,I thought:No pians,no gain,So,I read my book very "carefully".
"Test began!"somebody said.We closed the book,began the test.
(One hour later,the test ended.)
"Wow!the question is difficult!" "Yes!" "I think so!" "I agree with you!"... ...It was really hundreds respond to a single call!
Whoops!I hope I will have a high score!

No pains,no gains......不知道你们改什么……都错的……

英语语法太差