卫衣里面穿什么好男生:请大家帮我修改一篇英语日记

relaxing - relaxed
played computer - played with computer/played computer games
waited - waited for
teacher-teachers
they teach me a lot of knowledge - they teach me a lot

Later,my mother got home,I read a book两句之间没什么联系,可以用Later,my mother got home,and I also read a book

Today the weather was windy and cool.I think it made me feel really happy and relaxed.I stayed at home I played my computer and waited for my mother.
Later my mother got home. I read a book:"The World Of Unsolved Secrets".It is an amazing book!
I think books are good teachers. They teach me a lot of knowledge!
写得不错.句子通顺.但要注意标点符号.我改了一些小地方,你对照一下.Keep up the good job!

relaxing-relaxed,
waited-waited for
teacher-teachers
注意标点， think:(:)去掉

把the weather was windy and cool改成it was windy and cool(习惯说法）
把relaxing改成relaxed
played computer改成used computer或played computer games
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