韩国女团红色短裤:修改一篇英语日记

Yesterday,I was washing my clothes.At first ,I thought it was easy.But I was wrong.
I was washing my socks and shirt.And I did so long a time.But they were still very dirty.but my mother washed three pants.They were clean after washing ,I scrubed my socks again."Oh,they were clean!"I said.
Wash clothes is difficult!this is my opnoin now .

Formerly改为Originally

I'm washed my socks and shirt改为I washes my socks and shirts.

too long timeg改为 to a long time

Wash clothes is difficult!改为Washing clothes is difficult

Yesterday,I washed clothes.Formerly,I (thought) (it) is very easy.But I think it is too difficult (now).
I'm washed my socks and shirt(s).And I was exert(ing) myself too long time.But they were dirty,too.And my mother washed three pants.They were clean,I scrubed my socks again."Oh,they (are) clean!"I said.
Wash(ing) clothes is difficult!

Yesterday, I washed my clothes. Formerly, I thought it was very easy, but I felt it was too difficult when I started it myselft. I washed my socks and shirts, and I exerted myself for a long time, but they were actully dirty. My mother washed three pants and made them very clear. I scrubed my socks again. "Oh, they were clean!", I said. Washing clothes is really difficult for me.

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Yesterday,I washed clothes.At first,I thought it would be very easy.But now I think it is difficult(用too表示太...很难做成，隐含否定意思).
I washed my socks and my shirt.I exerted myself for a long time but they were still dirty.At the same time,my mother finished washing three pants,and they were clean indeed.I scrubed my socks again."Oh,they are clean!"I said.(直接形式要用现在时)
So now I believe that wash clothes is really difficult!

Yesterday I washed my clothes. I always thought t it was easy to wash clothes. Now I realize it is not easy at all.
I tried very hard to wash my socks and my shirt.But they were still dirty.And my mother washed my three pants.They turned out to be clean. I scrubbed my socks again.."Oh,they were clean at last!"I said.
Washing clothes is difficult!