高校问答华师大 陈默 文章:大家帮我看看，有没有错误，请指教．谢谢
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hobbies,such as handwriting,drawing and so on.I am interested in maths,
physics and English.I got the first prize in Huzhou Maths Olympic
competition.I studied in Changxing Experiment Middle Shool.My school is
so big.There are about 56 classes and about 2800 students in the school.I like the
playground of school best.It is so exciting.Everyday we do exercise there.
We all like sports,like football,basketball,table tennis and volleyball.
My school likes a big gardon.You can see many plants everywhere.It is different
with other schools.My school live is colourful.We had 7 classes everyday.
Our teachers never gave us a lot of homework.They gave us more time to do something
we liked.I love my school very much.
整体上还不错，It is different with other schools.中的with应改为from.
They gave us more time to do something we liked 应改为……we like to do
改了好多地方。总的来说，这个口头作文还不错。不过，开始写的是hobby，怎么后来写成了喜欢学校。是不是对题？你没写题。姓和名要分开；书法是calligraphy不是handwriting；My school likes a big gardon.是个典型错句。等等。你自己好好看看修改后的吧。
Hello,My name is Qiu Fang.My English name is Robert.I have a lot of
hobbies,such as calligraphy,drawing and so on.I am interested in maths,
physics and English.I got the first prize in Huzhou Maths Olympic
competition.I studied in Changxing Experiment High Shool.My school is
very big.There are about 56 classes and about 2800 students in the school.I like the
school playground best.Everyday we do exercise there.
We all enjoy sports,like football,basketball,table tennis and volleyball.
My school is like a big gardon.You can see many plants everywhere.It is different
from other schools. My school life is colourful.We had 7 classes everyday.
Our teachers never left us much homework.They gave us more time to do something
we liked.I love my school very much.