香港大学生命科学排名:帮我看看这篇文章啊,有错误请指教啊,谢谢大家了

说了半天，没说你是哪国哪省的啊
My school is so big.换成It's a very big school.
2800 students in the school换成2800 students in it
还有个逻辑错误，操场有什么可爱的，又有什么可exciting的？要说就说爱运动就完了。
like football中的like去掉
My school likes a big gardon换成My school is like a big garden
You can see many plants everywhere换成There are plants everywhere
different with换成different from

Hello! My name is Qiu Fang. My English name is Robert. I have a lot of hobbies, such as handwriting, drawing and so on. I am interested in maths, physics and English. (Last year,or this year?)I got the first prize in Huzhou Maths Olympic Competition.
I studied in Changxing Experimental Middle School. My school is so big that there are 56 classes and about 2800 students. I like the schools' playground best. It is so exciting. Everyday we do exercise there. We all like sports, such as football, basketball, table tennis and volleyball. My school is like a big garden, different from other schools. You can see many plants everywhere. My school life is colourful. We had 7 classes everyday. Our teachers never gave us a lot of homework. They gave us more time to do something we realy liked. I love my school very much.

My school likes a big gardon中like是介词的用法怎么能加s 应改成My school is like a big garden